once white~ haiku

freshly fallen snow

turns grey under careless feet-

as a broken heart

 

~Melanie Thomason

12/20/17

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Filed under haiku, micropoetry, Poetry

11 responses to “once white~ haiku

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  2. At once beautiful and melancholy.

  3. So pure and clean in one moment, then dirty and corrupted in the next. We’re all just snow in the end 😀 Good one.

  4. Three lines and yet…it speaks volumes.

  5. Well done for this prompt!! love it!

  6. For a first time ? This is an awesome haiku. Simple and beautiful as is the way of haiku.

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