August 6, 2016 · 6:30 PM
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softly silent

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daffodils

silently trumpet

the new moon

that crept in

softly and unseen as a

cat on padded feet

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~Melanie Thomason

 

 

 

 

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12 responses to “softly silent”

  1. Candy
    August 6, 2016 at 9:37 PM

    oh my, you’ve captured such a lovely moment

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  2. nokindofmagic
    August 7, 2016 at 3:37 AM

    There’s something about daffodils. I have always found them both beautiful and a bit dusturbing. Is it the shape, colour, I don’t know. Or maybe it is this feature you captured in this piece. Silent, softly, unseen… it actually made me feel a bit uneasy. As if there was a secret agrement between daffodils and cats (predators? :-)). One attracts attention and lures, hypnotises, while the other slowly circles around tou in the tall grass. Well, to be honest the whole world is against us (or I should say laughs at our delusions of being in control of anything) if even the new moon creeps in without a warning sign…

    A few lines, a lot of thoughts. That’s what I love.

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  4. hitandrun1964
    August 7, 2016 at 12:37 PM

    OMG it let me write n this one.

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  5. mislucja
    August 8, 2016 at 4:44 AM

    Wow .. I love this ๐Ÿ™‚

    Reply
  6. georgeplace2013
    August 8, 2016 at 6:58 AM

    daffodils silently trumpet…. love that, so apt

    Reply

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