May 2, 2015 · 12:38 PM
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fire?

It sounds so noble,

So wonderful

Your grand proclamations

That you would walk through fire

For her.

—

Bold words…

But in action

You’ve proven

You wouldn’t risk the flame,

Endure the slight pain

of reaching through

A candle’s flicker

To reach her.

Indeed,

You couldn’t be bothered

to even blow it out.

 

~Melanie Thomason

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7 responses to “fire?”

  1. hitandrun1964
    May 2, 2015 at 5:16 PM

    Wow…saying it like it is. Better to know than to lie to oneself, that’s for sure. Talk is cheap as they say…you just proved that.

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  2. Rajiv
    May 2, 2015 at 9:24 PM

    Wow… You are not in a happy mood…

    Reply
  3. nokindofmagic
    May 9, 2015 at 5:44 AM

    I really like how you travelled from an idea to a ‘microreality’, calling it a beautiful crash would be resorting to the most abused phrase ever, but I just can’t help it.

    Reply

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