I’m so full


I couldn’t have another bite

You’ll have to unhinge my jaw

If you want me to swallow

any more

 of your lies

~Melanie Thomason


Filed under 25 Words or Less, Poetry

16 responses to “Full

  1. oh wow, I didn’t see that coming….that was good! 🙂

  2. Oh wow! I know what you mean packed with pooh!

  3. BRAVO! This is amazing. Can i quote it to someone i know? 😉

  4. Apurva

    wonderful!! 🙂

  5. nokindofmagic

    I didn’t realise I missed out so much, now I’m devouring your poems and can’t get full! Melanie, you have this incredible ability to pinch my brain with your words, it’s some kind of a multi-sensoric experience, for some reason I could hear echoing patter…

    • Stop staying away so long, LOL
      You are too kind, I would tell you to stop lavishing me with praise yet you and I both know it is nice to hear 🙂

      Thank you so very much for all of your lovely comments.

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