January 14, 2015 · 12:53 AM
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Full

I’m so full

-really

I couldn’t have another bite

You’ll have to unhinge my jaw

If you want me to swallow

any more

 of your lies

~Melanie Thomason

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16 responses to “Full”

  2. mishunderstood
    January 14, 2015 at 6:38 AM

    oh wow, I didn’t see that coming….that was good! 🙂

    Reply
  5. MichelleMarie
    January 14, 2015 at 8:19 PM

    Oh wow! I know what you mean packed with pooh!

    Reply
  6. coffeegrounded
    January 15, 2015 at 2:29 AM

    BRAVO! This is amazing. Can i quote it to someone i know? 😉

    Reply
  7. Apurva
    January 15, 2015 at 8:01 AM

    wonderful!! 🙂

    Reply
  8. nokindofmagic
    January 17, 2015 at 11:30 AM

    I didn’t realise I missed out so much, now I’m devouring your poems and can’t get full! Melanie, you have this incredible ability to pinch my brain with your words, it’s some kind of a multi-sensoric experience, for some reason I could hear echoing patter…

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    • Wordifull Melanie
      January 17, 2015 at 8:45 PM

      Stop staying away so long, LOL
      Seriously…
      You are too kind, I would tell you to stop lavishing me with praise yet you and I both know it is nice to hear 🙂

      Thank you so very much for all of your lovely comments.

      Reply

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