encounter

hearing your voice

was like sucking on saltines

leaving my mouth dry and dusty

i turned to see if it was really you

and my stomach tried to leave without me

~Melanie Blackwell

 

 

 

 

 

20 Comments

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20 responses to “encounter

  1. Hmm, a good indication that you don’t like the person. 😉

  2. You really don’t !

  3. I know this feeling. 🙂

  4. Excellent image and description of meeting up with a very icky person.

  5. yeseventhistoowillpass

    Been there done that… So true

  6. Thank You for Being a Blessing in my Life. I Appreciate YOU 🙂

  7. Miranda Stone

    What a visceral description. Well done.

  8. nokindofmagic

    When was this written? I need to check my magic notebook, cause i’ve got a sibling piece and I sense telepathy…

    Great imagery, little words, massive impact.

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