Oasis~Haiku

punctured clouds spilling
May flowers drink greedily


verdant oasis

~Melanie Blackwell

12 Comments

Filed under 10 Words or Less, Blogging Community, haiku, Poetry

12 responses to “Oasis~Haiku

  1. I love this, it reads so nicely and the imagery is lovely.

  2. Rise above

    Hooo that was tasty, the clouds were especially delightful.

    The Haiku format is strangely difficult in its simplicity…for me anyhow.

  3. rich imagery Melanie! ty for reminding me of ‘verdant’,
    a beautiful word i don’t use often enough.

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