thoughts ~haiku

thoughts brew, filter through
this thick primordial ooze
percolating words

~Melanie Blackwell

6 Comments

Filed under 10 Words or Less, haiku, Poetry

6 responses to “thoughts ~haiku

  1. THAT is awesome. I just love it.

  2. it’s amazing the pictures we can paint in 17 syllables,
    love the vocabulary in this Haiku Melanie, nicely done!

  3. Genie

    Esoteric and deep.

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