Undoing (with Audio)

Another reblog from BF (before followers) πŸ™‚ I just added Audio for those interested in hearing it.


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2 responses to “Undoing (with Audio)

  1. Melanie, i’ve read and listened to this poem several times and i keep coming back, continue to get tripped up on this passage;
    and I rode- I strode,
    on my own two-feet
    to the gallows,
    the sad-sweet moment
    of my undoing
    its not magic
    but something else

    this is so reminiscent of me, not accepting myself and the purposeful self sabotage i practiced. it took a long time for me not to ‘stride to the gallows’. no, it’s not magic at all.

    oh, and i thought your reading was exceptional, it really helped me feel the intention in your words. ty for this.

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