October 7, 2013 · 11:58 PM
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WINTERING

I’m reblogging one of my first posts.  AND I’m adding an audio clip.  This is my first attempt at recording and I must admit it is kinda scary…so I started with a brief one 🙂 I’d love some feedback!

Wintering this body.

I wear my seperateness like a shield from fantasy and the fear of cold.

Read the rest at WINTERING.

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8 responses to “WINTERING”

  1. Cubby
    October 8, 2013 at 12:53 AM

    Love the poem and reading! Again, I can’t comment on that post due to some WP glitch, but I will say here that you did a fantastic job of your first recording! You have a lovely voice. 🙂

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  2. Carrie
    October 8, 2013 at 1:10 AM

    Love it! There is an added element to the poem when you hear it being told as opposed to just reading it. 🙂

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  3. words4jp
    October 8, 2013 at 9:26 AM

    lovely words, lovely voice:)

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  4. Paulette
    October 8, 2013 at 10:05 AM

    Just lovely Melanie. I enjoy your writing so much. You have a wonderful talent. You must never stop writing! An extra treat to have you read it to us! Please continue recording also.

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