her departing Son
left no forwarding address
her wounded heart cried
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oh, departing Sun
of her please take no recess
warmth and light provide
~Melanie Blackwell
written for Right2Write Prompt 1: Departing Sun by http://howanxious.wordpress.com (Dedicated to a dear friend (who knows who she is)…I know the years haven’t relieved the pain. Know that you are loved.)
Oh! Such a wonderful take on the prompt… I absolutely loved it.
Thanks a lot for participating and for such a beautiful piece. 🙂
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Apart from being touching and well constructed it is also very clever. To move us and make us think at the same time is a rare talent
Thank you so much for your kind compliments 🙂
Your words gently touched my heart, and your warmth brought the pieces together. Anticipation of the rising of the sun again. Hope, what an unshakeable force! You are the
“violin” in the fiddler on the roof. I will never be too old not to want to be loved. You dared to express yours in spite of it all. I am for ever grateful to have been touched by the kind of music you weave on the air………………………………………..
Be blessed eternally, my precious friend!
Miss you! Wish we lived closer.
And your words touch my heart. I’m so glad to have you in my life. So much more family to me than the biological ones.
Beautiful souls put together in Heaven. I’ll drink the Armenian coffee to that thought. I love you!
Beautiful souls indeed! …and Armenian coffee =Yummy 🙂